I traveling with a group of salt traders. Man the salt these people here trade are really smelly and taste, um really salty. Now you might think well It's salt so It's supposed to taste like that. I'm telling you this stuff is like saltier than the three oceans put together. And trust me that does not taste very good. But It's really smooth and when I say It's smooth, It's smooooooooth.
It look a lot like sand and these guys keep the top of the pile in the crates super flat. It's almost like it's just for show. And only certain people are allowed to get the salt when they're cooking. So I went to check out why they are so stricked about this salt thing. Uh ooh looks like they're smuggling weapons through the city gates.
Now we have a problem and if they get caught I'll get in trouble too!!. And the guards at the city gates won't even think to search there, so I guess I'll have to steal a guards outfit and um... catch the badish guys. And I'm only saying badish because there are kids with this group. And even if they didn't know they'll still get punished. Even if they're like what maybe only 3-6 , and they wouldn't even stand a chance. So much for a smooth ride with these guys.
Uh oh looks like the traders have just became traders. You know what the best part of this is? they have weapons and I don't. I mean that's crazy, I always have my sword. Well almost always have it with me. And they've already killed the guards, ransacked some homes, and set my on fire. But luckily I got away and put the fire out just before it reached my flesh.
Just before and I mean right when it burn through my armor. Then some crazy suicidal person comes out of an ally way and tries to spear me. I mean who would try that on a guard? anyway I have to stop these people and save the town. Well saving the town is proving to be hard and oh wait a minute Hi yah!!!!, ok now that was a close one. AHH!!! ...... Man these guys must have a secret ingredient for courage because they won't stop attacking me!!. the police here are yearning for victory but aren't really doing anything. The rebels have a miscellaneous of weapons and aren't affraid to use them at all.
Nice description of the salt.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used your vocab words. Nice Post
ReplyDeleteI really like your first paragraph! Your whole post was interesting and it made me want to keep reading! Nice job!
ReplyDeleteA secret ingredient of courage is always a nice ingredient to have.
ReplyDeleteThat was a good use of ingrediant. I like how fit it in there. I was a little bit confused on who was attacking you though. Still a nice story though! :)
ReplyDeleteinteresting post nice use yearning but miscellaneous is a bit concfusing
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